This week was very cold, so I had to stay inside for most of it. The poem below represents me looking at the land through the window.
Dreaming through the window on a cold Wednesday
Wind blowing over spirits
Blowing wind spirits over
Blowing spirits wind over
Spirits blowing over wind
Spirits over blowing wind
Over spirits wind blowing
Over wind spirits blowing
Wind over blowing spirits
Wind blowing over spirits
The Gift of Love
A
hand
Holding
my cold hand
On a summer day
The sun shines through the gray clouds
Firstly, I really liked to be able to connect my whole self (body, mind, and emotions) with mathematics because we have so few opportunities to do so. Furthermore, I enjoy poetry and I am always amazed by how poets can be impressively creative with the patterns they use to write and express different meanings. Before this week, I never made the connections between these patterns and doing mathematics, so it was an enlightening moment.
Secondly, after trying out some poems, I discovered some mathematical thinking processes that can be involved in poetry. I had to guess and check, count, try out and verify my work, work systematically and find an efficient way to record my trials. Sadly, I used my eraser a lot, so I do not have all the attempts, but you can see in this picture my original poem.
I decided that I did not like some of the combinations with the part ‘a tree’, so I started the first few lines again. And then, I changed the different parts and tried different combinations (I erased a lot) for the first 3 lines and finally liked one enough to continue writing the whole poem.
To make a connection with my article this week, the process that I used is a demonstration of how I used knowledge (patterns) in a dynamic way: using it to carry a meaning, trying out ideas and verifying them, simplifying it to make my work easier, mentally visualizing the pattern, etc.
Finally, I believe that many of my students would like to do an activity like this one (writing a mathematical poem). Like me, they would like to feel human while doing mathematics. Also, like mentioned in Writing and reading multiplicity in the universe: engagement with mathematics through poetry, poems can be a way to feel safe while engaging with mathematics (Radakovic et al., 2018). I have many students who demonstrate math anxiety while problem-solving, even if the problem is open and have multiple ways to get to the answer. Making them engage with mathematics through a poem could help them not feel this anxiety while doing mathematics, at least for this activity. Finally, poems can also be a way to connect mathematics to students’ world (Radakovic et al., 2018). In grade 9-10-11, there are not that many concepts that we can connect to my students’ daily life. Using mathematics within poetry could give them a rare chance to make this connection.
Reference:
Radakovic, N., Jagger, S., & Jao, L. (2018). Writing and reading multiplicity in the uni-verse: Engagements with mathematics through poetry. For the Learning of Mathematics, 38(1), 2-6.
Hi Noemi,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading about your process this week, both the poems themselves and the way you described the mathematical thinking behind them. There’s something powerful about how you connected your body, emotions, and environment to the structure of the poems. That first piece, built from the shifting permutations of the same words, feels almost like watching the wind move across the landscape in different directions. It’s a lovely example of how a pattern can carry meaning. Your students are lucky because you’re giving them a way to see mathematics not just as something to solve but as something they can feel and express.
I agree with Fiona! It was really delightful reading your poems, your process in crafting them, and your thoughts about the humanity of teaching and learning math.
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